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Monday 25 March 2013

My Retelling About The Snowman





This is a story about two girl’s named Tui and Ana and they stayed with their nan.One day nan said harry up Ana so they can go and play outside in the snow.When they got outside the was full with snow,there hill was snowy mountains everywhere they went it was full of snow.

They were walking in nana footsteps so they don’t trip.Then Ana started to collecting lots and lots of snow.Then tui said “Isn’t our snowman right in the middle of the road?”.  nan said “don’t worry the roads are closed”.Then they gave the snowman two eyes and one mouth and sticks for his arms.Then they saw a police car coming down the road.They thought the snowman got them in trouble then ana said “stupid snowman”.But after all the police gave a corot for a snowman’s nose.The called it the king of the road.

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